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Well Done to Sonny, as they said, the vocals are a lil too low, definitely feeling what you did with the hook, like the way you varied your flow, definitely should be a club banger, just make sure you don't become a one hit wonder! All the best and good luck, watch out for TI though, he gonna be after you after this one, Lol
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The song is very strong, its a good effort, you are a talented rapress
1:56 (3 scs) the bridge, I think you coulda came harder
the volume/mixdown really takes away the effect of how powerful the track is
I think the beat really carries you well, and is driving your voice,
your voice is very good....
The only thing I think you might wanna go over is, is that how many times you
wanna use the chorus I think its unnecessary at the end but after listening th chorus
bit at the end links to the ending..Thats it really, there's my feedback